On Midnight Hour. Poem by Naila Rais
On Midnight Hour.
On the beach, on moonlit night
Piercing the distance with sobbing sight
She sits with broken, heavy heart
Her dreams and wishes shattered apart.
On the sand, hand on the stone
When darkness could hear her silent moans
She watches cargo going away
While taking her heart where memories lay.
On the face, on midnight hour
Tears flowing as a rain of shower
She crushes all her negative gaze
Now her soul is filled with blaze!
I'd use " lie" (if i could) , not they rhyming " lay" , but, with poetic license, do have YOUR WAY! to MyPoemList. i wonder if you found the illustration before writing the poem. nice. bri ;)
Illustration was found after writing. Glad you liked sir! :) Thanks once again. NR
you have been away over 6 months poetess hope you are well and studied well waiting to read a newer poem
A soulful doleful muse poem on a deserted beach scene all very apt and wonderful in setting and expressing style. Kudos for this superb poem. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "
Very well written poetry, I could almost see the images you have painted with your words, excellent.10+
Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. UR POEM COMPARES WITH POET DYLAN CONGRTS NT
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A marvelous piece of poetry Naila!
Thnx sir for visiting! Naila