On The Sandy Shore (Haiku) Poem by Paul Stoned

On The Sandy Shore (Haiku)



on the sandy shore
i write your name next to mine
together with '+'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 28 May 2009

Much said in few words...nice. -chuck

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C.R. Clark 13 March 2008

Very nice. I really like haiku, but one is allowed, so few, words to relate that special feeling or observation. You have related it very well here. Thank, best regards Richard

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