On your pillow
Indent made
Shower running
There I laid
Sleepily
I stretched my limbs
And smiled as now
my act begins
I did feign
Unconsciousness
And breathed so deeply
As you dressed
I waited
as you fumbled blind
To see if you would
Still be kind
And gently plant
A morning kiss
Not try to wake me
From this bliss
(Soft wet touch
like dawns fresh mist)
Then pick your change
In pocket put
Down stairs you went
With gentle foot
And quietly
You turned the key
So careful not
To disturb me
You did this
As you always do
My darling husband
I love you!
A masterpiece on married life. Beautiful flow of words and perfect rhyme. I love it.
how sweet..a truly and absolutely a romantic poem, i have read so many love poems mam but this is my favorite one....and just so you know your husband is very lucky to have you for he got a wife who understand his love so beautifully.. thank you for sharing, love payal
a good experience to cherish.....nice one and introducing hereby ur husband through it
Wonderful - loved the read. You don't say in your poem if he gave you that kiss, but I am sure that he did.
A lovely poem of married life, your notes gave me a chuckle too,
A lovely poem of married life, your notes gave me a chuckle too,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful! ! ! So much sensibility and full of love! ! ! Lindo! ! !