Once Upon A Time... Poem by Ana Z. M.

Once Upon A Time...

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes I feel a little bit lonely,
when I know you are never coming back.
Sometimes I feel a little bit angry,
when i know the best has just gone by...

Once upon a time I was a happy person,
and now I am just falling apart..
Once upon a time I used to be the light on your window,
and now I am just a bitter memory left in the dark.

What was left of us is now dying as time goes by,
and I know there'll be nothing any better than this,
I know I won't love again, as I loved once upon a time.

And now there's nothing I can do,
just cry my tears,
live what's left of life,
Survive till the end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 06 June 2009

Sad but sober reflections on a past relation...good poem Ana...you convey your thoughts with much clarity there...10

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Bonnie Collins 03 June 2009

Anna this is so tenderly written from the sleve of your heart.. Remember things happen in life for a reason, sometimes the worst of reasons, and someday looking back you will see some sence of this...... AND you will love again, I promice....... Very nice write........ Bonnie

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Noel Horlanda 30 May 2009

another superb love poem, you're such a great poet, Ana especially in love criteria. The author is always taken for granted, mistreated and at the end in despair. Get my point? All lines in this piece of work is so loveable. LOVE IT!

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