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Once Upon An Autumn Day

Rating: 4.6

Once Upon an autumn day,
Colorful leaves began to fade
In the midst of a chilly, frosty air
As multitude of trees grew steadily bare.

Once upon an autumn day,
The whispering breeze was here to stay
Moving aimlessly through the countless trees
Scattering leaves with the greatest of ease.

Once upon an autumn day,
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Deci Hernandez 10 October 2012

Great job, with classic style. poem should have been written two hundred years ago. but i'm reading it now, watching the leaves fall.

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Jack Growden 10 October 2013

Well written, I have also written about the intriguing season of autumn. It is titled Autumn Leaves. Feel free to read, rate and comment on my work. Thanks: http: //www.poemhunter.com/jack-growden-2/

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Sarojini Pattayat 10 October 2012

[waiting for the winter snow to fall-] enhancing imagination. very nice.

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Hazel Durham 10 October 2012

Great rhythm and flow depicting so well autumn in all its glory!

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Mark Dillon 10 October 2012

nice poem, so many vivid and rich colours in autumn, its great to walk in the park and watch the leaves flowing in the strong breeze.

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Squeegee Duck 21 September 2019

lovely poem with wonderful imagination of Autumn

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BEAUTIFUL POEM! THANKS, I'VE BEEN NEW ON THIS SITE. THANKS AGAIN FOR SHARING THIS! ! ! ! YES, AND THE SPEAKER IN THE ABOVE POEM IS NOT CLEAR AND SPEAKING VERY SLOWLY. PLEASE CHANGE IT! ! !

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wendy kiktr 03 September 2018

why is she speaking so slow but it is a good poem

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Norah Tunney 01 April 2016

Yes I love the flow of this poem I feel the freedom of wind and leaves Yes a 10

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Brian Skyers 06 July 2014

the second of yours iv'e read, it flows nicely and I can see all that you say.

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