Once Upon An Autumn Day Poem by Joseph T. Renaldi
Once Upon An Autumn Day
Once Upon an autumn day,
Colorful leaves began to fade
In the midst of a chilly, frosty air
As multitude of trees grew steadily bare.
Once upon an autumn day,
The whispering breeze was here to stay
Moving aimlessly through the countless trees
Scattering leaves with the greatest of ease.
Once upon an autumn day,
The leaves whirled freely in every way,
Until at last they came to rest
Finding a haven in which to nest.
Once upon an autumn day,
The trees were dormant, and the leaves lay
Waiting for the winter snow to fall
To quickly obscure them one and all.
[waiting for the winter snow to fall-] enhancing imagination. very nice.
Great rhythm and flow depicting so well autumn in all its glory!
nice poem, so many vivid and rich colours in autumn, its great to walk in the park and watch the leaves flowing in the strong breeze.
JOSEPH...STUMBLED UPON THIS VINTAGE PIECE OF YOURS, AND PUT THE BRAKES ON...THIS IS FINE WORK....THE IMAGEWORX ALONE PAINT THE BACKDROP OF APICTORIAL GRANDEUR...STRUCTURE OF THE WORK IS WELL CRAFTED AS IS THE SMOOTH FLUXION THROUHOUT...I MUST REVISIT YOUR WORK AGAIN, AND WILL...FJR
BEAUTIFUL POEM! THANKS, I'VE BEEN NEW ON THIS SITE. THANKS AGAIN FOR SHARING THIS! ! ! ! YES, AND THE SPEAKER IN THE ABOVE POEM IS NOT CLEAR AND SPEAKING VERY SLOWLY. PLEASE CHANGE IT! ! !
Yes I love the flow of this poem I feel the freedom of wind and leaves Yes a 10
the second of yours iv'e read, it flows nicely and I can see all that you say.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/24/2023 8:45:19 PM # 1.0.0.1113
Great job, with classic style. poem should have been written two hundred years ago. but i'm reading it now, watching the leaves fall.