Monica Melissano

Rookie - 103 Points (July 12 1971 / Lecce, Italy)

One Fine Day - Poem by Monica Melissano

I wont give up
until we'll be sitting quietly
under a tree
in pale sunlight
staring in each other's eyes.

I wont give up
until I hear your voice
telling all the stories left untold
in peace
no regrets and no remorse.

I wont give up
until I open
the shell
in which you hide
emotions and connections.

from a spring of emotions and connections
the river of inspiration flowed.
And there's no other way.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and art

Form: Sonnet

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Written February 2015

Comments about One Fine Day by Monica Melissano

  • (5/14/2015 9:54:00 PM)

    An inspiring poem about what you want from love you have. You have a belief in your conviction that is commendable. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Amitava Sur (4/18/2015 4:35:00 AM)

    I liked the conviction in your write about upholding the love you have and believe in it. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

    Monica Melissano (4/18/2015 5:26:00 AM)

    Thank you....I wish that fine day will arrive at one point..!

  • Chinedu Dike (4/4/2015 3:26:00 PM)

    Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. I concur with your conviction: from a string of emotions and connections the river of inspiration flowed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

    Monica Melissano (4/4/2015 5:18:00 PM)

    Thank you so much Chinedu, we have to hold on to our convinctions even when others do their best to deny them. It's the lesson in your beautiful poem too, how much energy and passion in it! I loved it!

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 4, 2015

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