One Lingering Question Poem by Crystal Pierce
One Lingering Question
The question that lingers the most is why?
Why must I open my sarcastic mouth to joke?
why must criticize people as they go by?
Why is it most dangerous animals that I want to poke?
The answers are simple, I do suppose.
I joke to make friends,
most of those people are my foes,
and that one poke gives me a rush and makes me fear the end.
But the biggest why is, Why must I make you mad?
Why must I sit here and feel upset about it?
Why must I feel that I am nothing but bad?
Why can I do nothing about it but sit?
Why?
(continued) ..1 - do you joke to make friends out of your foes or others who are not foes, ...but not friends either? ? ? careful, girl! ! ! 2 - i get the rush part, but not the makes me fear the end part. end of what? and why would you want to fear it? ? ? come on, let's change it or send me an explanation, PLEASE! ! does the school have a counselor? ? (continued) ...
(continued) ...PH may have changed the way you typed this; PH seems to change things sometimes, for the worse! ! ! : why must criticize people...otherwise, look for two 'corrections' i think are needed. [[are you remembering to proofread! ? ]] AND IN 2nd stanza, i have two 'burning questions'. (continued) ...
oh, i just read a different bio about you on PH, on a different page; i like it. Biography of Crystal Pierce: I have a just a small amount of time but the spur of the moment encourages my rhymes. I enjoy what little I do on here and the support and criticism. It really helps..............ok, 'helpful Bri' shall try his best to help. now to actually READ your poem! (to continue) ..
Why must I open my sarcastic mouth to joke? why must criticize people as they go by? Why the most dangerous animals that I want to poke? Why, why, why? ? ? questioning and pausing yourself big questions and trying to find answers.. love ur poem. tony
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(continued) ..Why must I make you mad? Chryssie, are YOU the you here? ? ? i think so, but maybe it is someone else? regret is a very fitting topic for your poem. i wonder: is it really about you, and...............true? ! bri :) please send your reply(ies) as a message(s) ..........when you get a chance. thanks. i don't know if dr. Tony helped with HIS comment.