Only Footsteps In The Snow(For Lyn) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Only Footsteps In The Snow(For Lyn)

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You can tell me:
'Well, it's a face..? '

'But, whose...I'm not
so sure? '

Your reflection
smiles awkwardly

as if embarassed
it should know

...the you...of you.

A mirror caught
in another mirror

traps your words

leaving you stranded
in a dimension

other
than here.

() .

Your beauiful
caligraphy

falter...then.. fails


your hand

lost in the wilderness

of a page

the words
losing their minds

script degenerates
to gibberish

you become only
footsteps in the snow

a chill Alzhiemer's wind

cries through
the ruins of you

your face
in the mirror

more real
than the real

...you?

Thursday, October 23, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: mirror
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 26 October 2008

This is so poignant and true observation... 'you become only footsteps in the snow a chill Alzhiemer's wind cries through the ruins of you'...

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Scarlett Treat 23 October 2008

What a lovely birthday gift for me! A look at my 'true' self, 'more real...than the real me? ' I love it! S.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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