Only Time Can Tell [ 5 Senryu ] Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

Only Time Can Tell [ 5 Senryu ]

Rating: 5.0


The world is helpless
It is suffering greatly
From too much neglect

So much greed for wealth
Has lead to the destruction
Of our habitat

People are homeless
As population explode
The world gets smaller

What kind of future
Awaits next generation
On this planet earth

Only time can tell
The destiny of this world
On how it will end

Saturday, April 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 14 April 2018

Five gems in senryu form! Thank you!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 April 2018

Brilliant poem, Nudershada. Very insightful write well penned.

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Paul Brookes 15 April 2018

Wisdom comes but like the prophet crying in the wilderness no one hears a great write insightful and bittersweet

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 April 2018

Dear kabayang Nudershada, you have written such a great senryu....huge 10++++

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Kelly Kurt 14 April 2018

My advice to all that suffer with the stupidity of the world, and or any questions about meaning; is: Be happy! Now! Every now. Peace!

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Rini shibu 14 April 2018

A thought provoking poem

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