into my open grave
My casket with no lid
no need to hide anymore
the corpse that was once me
but never really was.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
cold... real... emits power with a precise hand... good poetry!
Short but very concise - packed with meaning & emotion - great poem.
This poem is incredible, simple yet filled with emotion, Truly magnificent. :)
So very deep. Your poetry always inspires contemplation within me.
And never will be.. Lots of depth (Not the grave) , your poem.. It is more
than it seems. I like it a lot.
Born to die one day! With the muse of the ways of life. Nice work.
A very poignant write with deep thoughts.
................................excellent! Warmly, Jerry
Astonishing depth in 28 words.10.
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