Look down
Six feet
into my open grave
My casket with no lid
no need to hide anymore
the corpse that was once me
but never really was.
So very deep. Your poetry always inspires contemplation within me.
This poem is incredible, simple yet filled with emotion, Truly magnificent. :)
Short but very concise - packed with meaning & emotion - great poem.
cold... real... emits power with a precise hand... good poetry!
Born to die one day! With the muse of the ways of life. Nice work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And never will be.. Lots of depth (Not the grave) , your poem.. It is more than it seems. I like it a lot. Jim Troy