Open The Door! Poem by Tiffany Letchworth

Open The Door!

Rating: 4.5


We were fighting every day. I wanted to Open The Door but had it shut in my face everytime. Letting me know he didn't want me to go. I hear us fighting back and fourth. Having every thing seem ok. If I were able to Open The Door I could chang my life. So I say thats enough, pack my stuff and leave! ! ! To a Whole New World! ! ! Never let someone bring you down! ! ! Fight back! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 August 2009

Y0u have a heart made of steel.Perfect attitude my dear Tiffany.

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Tyrone Wingfield 10 August 2009

nothing is worse than running to help someone and having them close the door in your face

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Nikunj Sharma 10 August 2009

Stimulating piece....just watch out 4 typos and do a spellcheck as well

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great attitude and gr8 poem

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Zeinab Sherif 15 August 2009

a simple small but precious one with a valuable advice thanks for it by the way it reminded me of a film called sliding doors it says that one minute could change someone's like 2 be better or worse.10+++

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Keith Hendrickson 12 August 2009

another great poem. i loved it. keep up the great work

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Mosi Wells 11 August 2009

To open doors is not an easy task but requires a skill and you must be a child of the light. Sometimes we as human beings tend to want to do things that is not in god's plan and we get brought down to our true existant to make us realize that we are only the creation and not the creator. Sometimes when you win you lose sometimes when you lose you win sometimes you don't win or lose sometimes when you surrender you can win but sometimes you can't even surrender to win. I like the concept you used about opening the door because that represents opportunity something we sometimes don't take advantage of when it is present.

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Anthony Edmond John 11 August 2009

sweet illustration.. work on arrangements..Love U

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