Would You? Poem by Tiffany Letchworth

Would You?

Rating: 4.6


Would you take me back if I told you I love you? Would you take me back if I told you I'm sorry? Would you take me back if I wrote you a song of LoVe? Would you forgive me if I ever hurt you? Would you be there for me if I needed someone too LoVe? Would you replace me if I wasn't there for you? Would you tell me I'm right even if I'm wrong? Would you lay with me untill I fall asleep? Would you ever leave me if I messed up? Would you tell me you still LoVe me even after I'm GoNe? ? Would You?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uchenna Nnodum 10 August 2009

nice poem.reviling the inner thoughts which most times are never spoken...

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Ency Bearis 10 August 2009

a question that the only answer is from the soul mate.... well expressed thoughts and well presented...good write...

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Tyrone Wingfield 10 August 2009

You will find the one who is perfect for you when the answer is undoubtfully yes

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 August 2009

What would you do when you fall for someone.Definitely a what you have described in here.Keep on writing dear.

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Nikunj Sharma 10 August 2009

No one shall say no 2 a young n smart poetess.....nice piece written from heart

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Slade Oriley 14 November 2009

I see a girl who is wanting to be accepted. She's afraid she isn't going to be good enough for the guy of her dreams. Why did the guy leave in the first place? After being hurt it's hard to open u, but it comes with time and maturity. I hope the girl in this poem finds fulfillment in life. Great work keep it up.10

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Wesley Mincin 18 August 2009

A lot of Free Verse. If anything, all your poems so far have been Free verse. I was wondering, do you ever rhyme or have considering rhyming?

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Zeinab Sherif 15 August 2009

if he madly loves u that u r his life & soul so he won't see anyone but u for love is blind. if he loves u that much i'm sure he will do all what u said but when he does all of this be sure dear that he's not a human but an angel.

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Keith Hendrickson 12 August 2009

another passionate piece... let me know when u post more and i will be more than happy to read an comment..... thanks 4 sharing.

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Mosi Wells 11 August 2009

I would do all these things with you and some of them you wouldn't have to do.

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