Broken Heart Poem by Tiffany Letchworth

Broken Heart

Rating: 4.6


What is in my heart is more deeper than what is in my mind. I try not to think about it when I'm alone. You walk me through the hard and I stop at the easy and think to my self, 'Wow how did I make it this far? ' We never fight just smile and wave with nothing to say. You are sitting outside laughing and I crying away my faith inside. I wonder what you think but never say or ask. Still have feelings and care no matter what others say. You ask me to sing to you Why? Do you still care? 1.12.09 was the day we were meant to be! 1.16.09 was the day you shattered my soul... From the deepest part of my heart and soul! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 August 2009

Four days to cause a broken heart? ? You have to live with it for ages, to have a real impact.Nicely written, anyway.

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Tyrone Wingfield 10 August 2009

Dont listen to idiots, it can take anywhere from 20years to 20 seconds for someone to break your heart, I really liked yout poem by the way

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Anna Franklin 10 August 2009

it is such a lovey poem...it touches me....

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Anna Franklin 10 August 2009

please check out my poems

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Ronald Doku 10 August 2009

this is good, real good.i liked it. keep writing

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Wesley Mincin 18 August 2009

Very specific. Sorry you hurt.

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Ben Burgess 18 August 2009

amazing poem very deep! excellent, well written

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Shelly Shelly 16 August 2009

i think the guy lost something he would always repent of you were genius on this piece of work.. magnificnt...........10++

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Zeinab Sherif 15 August 2009

hey the poem is talking wow so we have now a new talented poetess. keep writing.

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Alex Gomez 15 August 2009

Honest criticisms, this block text style should be changed and a few spelling errors corrected. Otherwise, it was a fairly well written poem with an enticing story. Good job.

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