Though the lotus shares a bond
With the muddy and murky pond,
Yet lotus is holy and precious,
As our birth never defines us.
What we make out of ourselves is vital.
Only that aspect is important and crucial.
What we make out of ourselves is vital- very good poem short but very impressive /with thanks 10
What we make out of ourselves is vital! A cute poem dear Bipasha! I greatly admire your theme selection and style of penning! (10)
" Birth never defines us." A great and moving line from a beautiful poem. Revisiting this marvelous write imbued with a meaningful message.
Finest of wisdom poured in poetic form. We can learn so much from Nature. Thank you for sharing Bipasha, and thanks again for reading my poem Grandma’s advice and for your comment.
Well said. Birth does not and should not define us. The poem carries a profound message for those with obscurantist mentality. Thanks for this meaningful poem. I quote: What we make out of ourselves is vital. Only that aspect is important and crucial.
A profound and thought provoking write and that too with rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent....you always think wide and broad and high and deep to present your thoughts just in short poems and that is what I like the most in you..I always like short poems...thank you Bipasha for this great work
Thank you for such wonderful words Ma'am...