Our Dark-Time. Poem by Fay Slimm

Our Dark-Time.

Rating: 5.0


Preceding the dawn are hours from which some
Shrink, perhaps thinking of danger or fear.

But my love and I, with dark's challenge, come
Alive, we find starlight mystically clear,
As together we ride midnight breezes.
Feet astride clouds, we lightly sail the sky,
Halo the moon with gold, then descend, pleasing
Ourselves in some quiet lake, where, naked
We make love to the tune of a small rill
Which fills the air around with moon's sacred
Glowing white notes, whispering to us still
More clearly, in wet-tinkling water ways.

We then feel nearer to paradise, more
Than before. We honour the night, forsaking
Sun. - dusky-dark moonbeams thrill to the core
Our nightly reunions - - - Sated with love
We can exist, until next starlight above.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 December 2008

A starlight Fantasy Fay, great write... Andy 10

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Susan Williams 23 April 2019

Another 10++++++++++++++++++++++++ on this gorgeous piece of writing

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Susan Williams 23 April 2019

Absolutely and stunningly lovely! ! ! You and your pen are a match made in heaven! ! !

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Kris Smith 31 December 2008

Beautiful write Fay beautiful world you come from 10 ++++ Chris

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Reshma Ramesh 31 December 2008

sated with love................wonderful write

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Scott Austin 31 December 2008

This is a very passionate piece of work you have written, thank you for sharing your writes with us. Scott

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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