Our Relationship Poem by Asif Andalib
Our Relationship
Our relationship has turned so bad now-a-days
It's like a disease that is killing me always
Our love was forbidden like Adam's apple
But we fell in love that has made our lives hell
You were so warm and I was so nice to you
We were so happy so love seemed right and true
The devil screwed it up he became jealous
We couldn't understand we were so callous
Now I can't sleep without remembering you
So I am waiting all time for someone new
Now you look at me like a shrewd careful thief
What more do you want babe I have enough grief
I don't want you anymore I want good rapport
Now I don't want your love now I need your support
poem is good but do not seek passport but seek love/. I pray for you both. May God bless you both.
This is really well written. I love the rhyming structure and your choice of words. I really enjoyed reading it xx
beautiful i feel the actions all along it's awesome and reminds me of my case. May THE ONE GOD be with you Guess Who
A sad tale of truth... i understand this piece so well but you may be surprised, a person once told me in love, you love, you live, you accept, you grow, then you sometimes grow to hate each other and then you start at the beginning, again...its just a case of patience.... thought provoking piece which i would of places a 10 happily by...tyvm karen
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/22/2024 7:44:29 AM # 1.0.0.1119
not a bad piece, nicely written