Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Monday, October 15, 2012

Our Relationship Comments

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Our relationship has turned so bad now-a-days
It's like a disease that is killing me always

Our love was forbidden like Adam's apple
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Jiya 123 24 October 2012

Nice Poem..................................

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Shadow-strikeraven Cma 23 October 2012

This is really well written. I love the rhyming structure and your choice of words. I really enjoyed reading it xx

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Guess Who 16 October 2012

beautiful i feel the actions all along it's awesome and reminds me of my case. May THE ONE GOD be with you Guess Who

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Karen Sinclair 15 October 2012

A sad tale of truth... i understand this piece so well but you may be surprised, a person once told me in love, you love, you live, you accept, you grow, then you sometimes grow to hate each other and then you start at the beginning, again...its just a case of patience.... thought provoking piece which i would of places a 10 happily by...tyvm karen

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Saif Ali 15 October 2012

Very bad relationship but good poem

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Anita Sehgal 15 October 2012

enjoyed reading your heartfelt poem.. kp it up!

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Hazel Durham 15 October 2012

A heartfelt poem with good rhythm and flow, great write!

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Ramesh Rai 15 October 2012

poem is good but do not seek passport but seek love/. I pray for you both. May God bless you both.

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Kelvin Owusu 15 October 2012

not a bad piece, nicely written

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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