Our relationship has turned so bad now-a-days
It's like a disease that is killing me always
Our love was forbidden like Adam's apple
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This is really well written. I love the rhyming structure and your choice of words. I really enjoyed reading it xx
beautiful i feel the actions all along it's awesome and reminds me of my case. May THE ONE GOD be with you Guess Who
A sad tale of truth... i understand this piece so well but you may be surprised, a person once told me in love, you love, you live, you accept, you grow, then you sometimes grow to hate each other and then you start at the beginning, again...its just a case of patience.... thought provoking piece which i would of places a 10 happily by...tyvm karen
poem is good but do not seek passport but seek love/. I pray for you both. May God bless you both.
Nice Poem..................................