Our Story Poem by Rahman Henry

Our Story

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They appeared with high voice
The gods and the saviours,
Distributors of either democracy or development
And asked:
You need food and clothing
Or freedom of speech

We were in a fix
We had to keep silent
We were too poor to raise our voice
We were in want of bread and butter
We lived on hand to mouth
We were boneless and backboneless
Our silence choose the second option

Then development replaced democracy
Dispotism replaced democracy
We lost our voice and bowels
Hope and dreams

In all sense, we remained the poorer

Sunday, January 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: bangladesh,fate,reality,tyranny
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 03 January 2016

Offers of charity often come with a price. Nicely written

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Wild Horse 03 January 2016

In all sense, we remained the poorer.... The poem reflects a real life story of Bangladesh. Thanks dear poet!

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Sanjib Purohit 03 January 2016

We were boneless and backboneless Our silence choose the second option

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Photon Roy 03 January 2016

Then development replaced democracy Dispotism replaced democracy We lost our voice and bowels Hope and dreams

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Golam Morshed Chandan 13 January 2016

We were in a fix We had to keep silent We were too poor to raise our voice We were in want of bread and butter We lived on hand to mouth We were boneless and backboneless Our silence choose the second option

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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

Taking charity often has a price tag - one that will cost you dearly, your freedom and your once assertive voice in life are taken usually. Given food to keep you from revolting. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Hans Vr 08 January 2016

I am dreaming of a world without borders. a world without greed. A world where 80% of the good people lead and the 20% of greedy ones follow. Now the bad guys shout loudest and get the power One day there will be so much wisdom so much kindness, that the few greedy ones will get their fulfilled without having to be bad without having to dominate. They will see and follow. Hard to imagine that this is more than a dream, but deep in my heart there is super strong belief that one day this dream will be a reality.

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Ashek Sarker 04 January 2016

we are in want of bread and butter but it's opium they always offer and thus prolong our slumber

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Farzana Shumi 03 January 2016

We were in a fix We had to keep silent We were too poor to raise our voice We were in want of bread and butter We lived on hand to mouth We were boneless and backboneless Our silence choose the second option

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Rahman Henry

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Natore, Bangladesh.
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