Monday, April 15, 2013

Our World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our world has grown colder
Much colder than before.
The streets and the headlines
All seem to tell us so.
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Walterrean Salley
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Valerie Dohren 24 April 2013

Very sad but true, we need to regain that gentleness and kindness which seems to have been lost. Excellently write.

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Joseph Anderson 22 April 2013

Truthfully disturbing..Can we, will we ever get it back together? I am so fearful for our later generations. You so clearly have shown how we have erred. Profoundly importent thoughts throughout this poem

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David Wood 19 April 2013

A smashing poem. I have a poem Our World but is different to your one

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Valsa George 19 April 2013

Watching everyday happenings in the world, a sensitive soul is likely to be pained and is sure to wonder where we are heading to! Dismal is the whole picture around us. As you feel, instead of cursing the darkness, let us light a candle! Though sounds an old cliche, still it holds good! ! A thoughtful write! !

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Shahzia Batool 16 April 2013

No one can stay unaffected by this day to day coldness of the world which is getting more n more devoid of the warmth of virtues and goodness...! ! !

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Walterrean Salley

Walterrean Salley

Savannah, Ga
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