Our World: A Sea Of Bloody Chaos Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Our World: A Sea Of Bloody Chaos

Rating: 4.5


Within the sea of a world of sheer chaos
...Barbarian's continue to take their EVIL toll
Mass murdering hundred's of thousand's over the years
...To please their 'God? ' their ultimate goal.

Killing & dying for their heinous deed's
...With the promise: 'Their Paradise To Be'
Thus taking the breath's of one too many innocent's
...Alas, bringing blood filled waters to our chaotic sea.

Such vile, caustic, souls behave as if 'entranced'
...Much like zombies with a diabolic joy for slaughter
Could their 'God', indeed, be 'The Fallen One'?
...Who directs them to bloody our once peaceful water.

Radical terrorists, are indeed, destroying the world we once knew
...One country at a time they act with nary one word
No warning bell- -of their 'Barbaric Hell'
...Only the 'death knell' of the bombs thunderous blast heard.


Theodora Onken
5/26/17

Still in tears for those who perished at the concert in Manchester.

Friday, May 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: blood,dying,evil,innocence,murder,terror,terrorism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A verse about our dying world; about the evil that has been unleashed against most of humanity. Until some years ago i really couldn't even imagine such evil existing in our world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 16 July 2017

Heard you were ill. Sorry to write here but there is no other way I can reach you. Just to say, I hope you are better and send you love and best wishes for a swift recovery. Your worried friend, Sandra

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Theodora Onken 27 July 2017

Thank you sweet Sandra...yes, i am dealing with an illness and sometimes - i can be remiss in regards to coming on and thanking everyone. Have my good days and not so good days. i thank you for your concern...pretty much have put my entire health in God's hands. God Bless you, Sandra.

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Sandra Feldman 08 June 2017

So very well described and said By all who now are living SHOULD BE READ!

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M Sagnik Das 26 May 2017

ohhooo what a poem...luv it! ! !

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Theodora Onken 03 June 2017

M Sagnik Das - Thank you! Happy that you luv it!

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