aung si myanmar


Overcoming A Night - Poem by aung si myanmar

A sun is blocked by an accident.
My soul shocks and is almost dead.

The sky of moonless night
Consoles me without might.

With the aid of eerie silence,
I hide inner wounds in deepest chest.

I pack my broken heart in tight
In the handkerchief of shameful pride.

Under the gossips of pole star,
I wear a necklace of tears.

Even at the moment of star falling,
No chance to pray and sing.

Twin weak knees start to demonstrate
Not to keep standing up with faith.

Now..., I put the dark behind,
And escape from midnight blind.

For the unfamiliar light of dawn,
Like a melodic bird in tunes
Which flies to balmy blooms,
I'd better create greatest fortunes.


Comments about Overcoming A Night by aung si myanmar

  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (11/8/2014 2:14:00 AM)


    Nice poem, rich images and poet's passion, ringing a note of hope at the end. (Report) Reply

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  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (11/8/2014 2:13:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem with rich images being painted. Full and carries much in tunes and content, beautifully ending with a tune of hope and search for fortune. Wow! (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (9/9/2012 1:38:00 AM)


    this work is great and cool. nice mixture of different things those just bring us to the other place. well done, dear friend.
    Good job.
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  • Eindaray Kyaw (8/30/2012 11:56:00 PM)


    So wonderful..so beautiful....so meaningful.....Actually I am out of words to praise you! ! (Report) Reply

  • (8/30/2012 11:16:00 PM)


    Wonderful! ! How to pack your broken heart and create the greatest fortunes? That interests me! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 30, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 5, 2012


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