Oxygen (Monoku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Oxygen (Monoku)

Rating: 5.0


we consume oxygen for life and oxygenation consumes lives

Thursday, December 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 02 December 2019

I like the thought-provoking wordlplay here. I also like the term " monoku" for this verse form. I too have written straight 17-syllable short poems without dividing into 5- 7- 5- syllable lines. I invite you to read my sequence " JULY RAIN IN SEATTLE." Beneath the sequence I have added a note on this form of haiku.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 December 2017

A short witty write. Great piece.10

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Kostas Lagos 14 December 2017

This is brilliant! Thak you!

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Binayakumar Mohanty 14 December 2017

Nice poem with good biology dear poet.Thanks for sharing.

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