Thoughts of daydream, Swear of love,
With you, wrecked heart like sharp thorn,
And mesmerizing reminiscence of that strolling
Made heart like quarry and impell it to moun.
And memories of your sensual grin,
At my silliness and that roaming,
On that 'diluge full' eve'
Grimaced ma' heart, and
That droplets proves stingful tears now.
Shall you move ahead;
A corner in your heart,
Always missed a sensitive carer,
And felt that loneliness that can never be filled.
And not this only wreak me,
It also let your whole life
Sans happiness, sans love, sans Sweet Sweetheart.
How come this sweet poem can make pain felt so much inside the write....a write...it means you did a very nice job and play with handful creative words to pull all emotion out from chest, well done_Soul
A well articulated piece on the distress felt in bliss of love, nicely captured to drive home the essence of the piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
A very nice piece of work. Keep it up and, thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.
A cry of love over love lost or love rejected. A very nice way of painting the emotions created by the vacuum of the loss. Touching and moving! Thanks for sharing this.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
aww... i felt that its really a very touching poem fully emerged in your emotions...i liked it very much..thanks for the invitation. :)