Of the heart-touching beauty
I detect a sound sound
Which let all hatred to wither,
And brim in whole sorrounding so profound.
Shall it started elaborating,
I was being mesmerized,
And it felt all angels of heaven,
Gather and dance and being serenaded.
So far, Till my heart and eyes,
Could succeeded in gobbling that adoration,
I was standing quite like statue,
And when I come in sensation,
I found that it was that rendezvous,
Where I first met my Sweet-heart.
Beautiful and romantic bring me to the past! ! ! ! Great
great write.....so passionate expressions..........keep writing....
a nice poem showing the beauty of romance........good use of words in the last four lines..........KEEP WRITING.
a statue... is a clear metaphor of your poem. Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed day!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wonderful description........great imagination and imagery............great and intense feelings..................lovely and beautiful write :)