Panorama Poem by Fantone Mdala

Panorama

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I follow the dying star to the awaiting place


Striding through the motion between time & space


A recurring moment I relive day in & day out


Trailing to the edge of the earth


Where the earth passionately kisses the sky


A wardrobe where the day changes into night


And the noble night flaps into day


A magical place where mother nature sprawls


Her emotions through the majestic rainbow


As she silently smiles at the end of the storm


Reviving humanities' lost hopes and dreams


A fountain flourishing with endless life


A place where my heart will finally feel at ease


Drenched of that immeasurable peace


Yet I gently waltz towards the prospective future


With nothing at-hand but an imagination.

Monday, May 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: anticipation,destination,destiny,faith,fate,futuristic,hope,personification,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 28 May 2019

I follow the dying star to the awaiting place Striding through the motion between time & space A recurring moment I relive day in & day out Trailing to the edge of the earth - - - - - - A fantastic poem of nature.Every line is beautiful.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 May 2019

Dear Fantone Mdala! I felt great beauty of nature in this poem. I liked the verse most, Where the earth passionately kisses the sky A wardrobe where the day changes into night. Thanks.

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Fantone Mdala 22 May 2019

Am so honored with your intricate complement Jazib. It means a lot and I'll take it as form of motivation to me. Thanks for the support

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