Desperation Poem by Fantone Mdala
Desperation
A gaze in the night sky
Got me looking at the snail's pace fading clouds.
As the lazy moon beams cut through the stratum of clouds,
Only to reveal a full moon
Seemingly smiling mockingly across the sea of heavenly bodies
The verge of desperation and heartbreak lures me into the streets.
Only to clear my mind
Worse still, her pretty face popping in my mind
Hallucinations, for a fellow pedestrian
Only to earn a thread of curses as a reward at the point of touching
the victim
My face soaked in shame
A need for her embrace hits me hard
Recalling how it warmed the cockles of my heart
Driving away discomfort
Sigh! ! !
Now all that is left is the embrace
Of that precious memory to torture me
To the point of desperation........
Some really vivid imagery here Fantone....I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
A very nicely written first offering... imagery pops vividly out of the verse.10+
This is a vital expression, a livewire of thought and feeling... wonderful work
Well conceived and nicely penned in persuasive poetic expressions from the heart. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Fantone.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/5/2024 8:44:45 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The internal turmoil and deep emotions of the lover has found beautiful expression in this poem.Let me quote- - Now all that is left is the embrace Of that precious memory to torture me To the point of desperation........
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