Mubeen Sadhika

Papyrus - Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

The pith became the
enactment of records
memories stored
the forgettable outflow
putrid smell remains
the odour evokes past
inseparable testimony
crumbling down the proof
the tracks of reputation
the sketches of history
the kin in binary relation
the methods to be traced
so as immortal manure
stupefied in flora.

Comments about Papyrus by Mubeen Sadhika

  • (10/10/2009 1:57:00 AM)

    The theme is not for the faint brain but with binary connection can
    fathom out what you are saying and history is as such to study how we went wrong...good poem but I think with your talent plain english would suffice
    (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Aziz Alkaabi (10/9/2009 1:07:00 PM)

    I need to study this at an ease!
    With the problems we have in posting, sometimes and due to some web coughs, I need to write down a long respnse and, giving experience, I might loose it!
    (Report) Reply

  • Ravi A (10/9/2009 12:01:00 PM)

    A really wonderful idea that has been said in good verses. Yes. You have the capacity to go into the heart of every element of this grand Nature. This insight is often missing in majority of poets and people around us. What to do? Keep going! (Report) Reply

  • (10/9/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    Papyrus records from the past, help our understanding now. A excellent write. (Report) Reply

  • (10/9/2009 9:54:00 AM)

    Papyrus is like the human skin on this poem. Regardless of time passed or past experiences once itched to the memory its there for eternity. A scent of a flower or a sound of some sort always manages to awaken past time and bring forth past into present. Loved ittttttt…thanks 10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Chris G. Vaillancourt (10/9/2009 9:52:00 AM)

    Interesting write. I like the flow of this piece (Report) Reply

  • (10/9/2009 9:17:00 AM)

    you found poetry in a pen...great read...thanks for the invite (Report) Reply

  • (10/9/2009 8:11:00 AM)

    No words! Brilliant poem.. (Report) Reply

  • (10/9/2009 8:05:00 AM)

    Very evocative. Stirs up a lot of images and experiences. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    the kin in binary relation
    the methods to be traced
    so as immortal manure
    stupefied in is beatiofully rhymed poem with clear vision..i liked the idea and poem.....10
    (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (7/29/2009 9:09:00 AM)

    'stupefied in flora'
    well done
    (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2009 7:06:00 PM)

    I like this one a lot Mubeen (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2009 8:51:00 AM)

    perfect work, keep it up.10+++ (Report) Reply

Read all 13 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 15, 2009

[Report Error]