Smile...smile...where to smile...
through ears...no...nose...
mouth is...for...sounds...
eyes can...hear...noise
Gliding in air...no body...
flapping hands...to feel...
screaming...not getting...ground...
belonging to space...in spaceless..
Touched...not...to be touched...
ate spice...feeling...the tongue...
cried...knowing...the agony
moved...rocked...sensed...senseless
normal...replacing...order...
abnormal...regularizing...peculiar...
populating common...in uncommon...
shutting off...connections..to connect...
You really understand the subject before you write about something. The unfortunate ones, in their own different world. a sudden reaction, caught unware, but they are gifted in some special way. They have some amazing talent. A kid I know can recollect any date of birth you tell him, and even the day it will fall on the next year.
i feel that poem can be phrased in a better way, anyways content of the poem and topic was different and good..
you have a very unique thoughts you see things in a different way.... Autistic smile...you made it so impressive.. autistic smile..their smile is the most innocent smile anyone can give honest and sincere... thanks for making this... really great... 10++ Lovelots, Maia
Great perception! We’re far from our inner spontaneity. All are after thought. Ten+ ++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
very expressive of how others may actually feel when asked to smile. For some, smiling is just a reflex and the heart does not agree with it. The poem expresses that distinction by saying that a true smile should be felt from the heart. Thumbs up!
Deep and felt, beautifully expressed. Great poem, my friend! Greetings, Dragon Wizard
Very, very nice, you've described the whole autistic smile, , , ,10
Very good. A whole world of emotions that fails to be emoted! I like the stop-start style, accurate in it's representation of the autistic world we couldn't begin to fathom. Great stuff keep it up!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That really is a perfect reproduction of the structural features of an autistic individual. Very nice!