Passage To Heaven Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Passage To Heaven

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Passage to heaven

New wave of violence
No sight of peace
What has happened to us?
Where is brotherhood old trust?

Intolerance is growing
And allowing
People to attack with weapons
To kill them on the spot and earn curse

In many parts of world
Only hatred is sold
'You shall have passage to heaven'
You shall be called martyrs even

Such lies are spread
The message is clearly read
People are brain washed
Youngsters are deliberately pushed

Let us not make people to flee
Leave behind everything to live under tree
Who shall like to be called 'refugees'?
In their own land with no blessings

Passage To Heaven
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 December 2015

Let us not make people to flee Leave behind everything to live under tree Who shall like to be called refugees? In their own land with no blessings

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 24 December 2015

a very good message indeed sir...

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 December 2015

Fanaticism of any kind is harmful for humanity on the whole. This message through this meaningful poem is very appropriate in the prevailing scenario world-over. Thanks for the write.10++ points.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 December 2015

welcome Scott Ransopher and Kunnathuveettilravindranath like this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 December 2015

Noel Horlanda Merry Christmas to you! Unlike · Reply · 1 · 10 hrs. 24 Dec

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 December 2015

I'm speechless. This is a very powerful piece. Well done Hasmukh. 25 Dec by Toby or not Toby That is the question | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 December 2015

I totally agree! Great poem 25 Dec by Baylee Corona | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 December 2015

Persian Khushi Good one jadia, thank you. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Yesterday at 11: 12am today by hasmukh amathalal

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 December 2015

xScott Ransopher and Kunnathuveettilravindranath like this. Comments Hasmukh Mehta Hasmukh Mehta welcme Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now 24 Dec

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 December 2015

welcome k ravidranath, lieansolano, nagabhanu m scott ransopher Unlike · Reply · 1 · 18 mins 24 Dec

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