hazem al jaber

Rookie - 104 Points (21 may 1965 / kuwait)

Passer-By Night... - Poem by hazem al jaber

passer-by night...

no one there..

only, my pains

here i am carrying my pains...

passing through a lot of thorny ways...

passing through only your eyes...

nothing can get me away from you..

walking just only to reach you...

walking, nothing i can see..

only just you..

only your eyes which lights up my way..

a sweet of my nights...

sweet eyes, which guides me through this dark path...

please, supply me with a longing that never get last...

that love which is only belongs to me..

only, and for me...

its my love which lasting forever..

lasting with an earth`s decision...

and engraved at every house`s door...

o sweetheart...

your eyes created only to cover me..

created just to look, and to take care of me...

no one can care about me as your eyes do...

no one can light my ways in this dark path as you do...

here i am walking and passing by night...

walking and feel you, next to me...

came to pass those nights...

just because the longing which i keep for you...

came through those darkness nights...

only to be with you...

and to talk to your eyes...

here i am my sweet eyes..

here i am to talk with you...

so please talk and light my heart with your eyes..

your eyes which i am passing now through...


Comments about Passer-By Night... by hazem al jaber

  • (9/28/2009 12:07:00 PM)

    Look into my eyes
    which shine a light
    for your beautiful soul
    and let your soul shine
    with love
    for my eyes.
    Because I need to understand
    your dreams
    and to unlock the mysteries
    from that bleak and solitary place
    belonging to your soul,
    where only the pain
    reigns like a queen.

    Your sad lyric poem is excellent...touching...I hope that the poem I wrote for you now to bring you the necessary light.Be blessed

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  • (2/19/2009 3:36:00 PM)

    ''lasting with an earth`s decision...and engrave at every house door...'am having confusion bout this line coz it cant relate as to male nd female relationship so, this maybe a wish to individual to use and support the subject of the poem to cover him from the claws of the enemy......

    ok, we will start now the conversation dear poet....

    if only my eyes could give light to your path
    if only my eyes could light you way
    if only mine could make your day a brighter one
    so, with all my heart, i'll give this to you..

    but can you promise
    you could take care of my eyes?
    could it be not hard for you
    to use my eyes as protector of you?
    if so, take my eyes with you
    take this until you want
    for this is the chance u'll not be alone
    this is the chance i could be with you...
    how if, , , , if you lost my eyes
    could there'll be one to give you another eyes?
    how if, , , if you destroy the eyes i gave?
    will you look for another eyes?
    hope there'll be lots of them
    to offer their eyes like i did...

    these lines are full of pains, heartaches, sufferings and could cause chest pain..the first 3 are curable by your own, while the 4th one is a medical problem so u must consult to the md..eyes here is the subject, but i guess this statement has speficification to whom this eyes....becoz u are not longing for any eyes...you longed for only a pair of eyes from one person...a person whom you want, a person who will look after you, a oerson who is very special to you and maybe a person whom you loved...
    but since the title is ''passer by night''so shall i say, .........love is fix, true love is constant, it will not only pass, it is engrave in your heart..so the thought of this poem is more related to patriotism again....my gosh.....okey...again, again, again, again, again, again, ...........wait..........
    on your way home, you cant expect nice ways, , , there are thorny paths, there are wide and there are not...but all people in that road is looking at you waiting for you to ask help from them..dont hesitate, if u cant use your pen coz you think, its late, then use your words to spread what you like out of your words, , , , , , if your words are not effective, then use your charm....you have a very charming personality so use it as your last recourse..but be sure to bring your medicine for chest pain ha.....whew, this is my 2nd attempt to write this commnt, my first one is the best ever, , , so, just be satisfied to these words....always remember, , you are the living hero of your own, let's stop sometimes to rest, , lets pause to breathe and lets relax to think...if you think you're doin good, then go ahead, , , but if you think, it will harm you, , , oh my gosh, why should you? .....all i can give is my pair of eyes to watch over you, thru that eyes hope you could realize that i have no more eyes for me, can i take yours as replacement? ......hehehehehhehehehehhe.....honey, thanks for nviting.....

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  • (2/19/2009 6:37:00 AM)

    here i am my sweet eyes..
    here i am to talk with you...
    so please talk and light my heart with your eyes..
    your eyes which i am passing now through...
    hhhmmm nice sweet poem...lovely and heartfelt as always!

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 19, 2009

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