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Pathway Of Life

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All along the pathway of life,
There are various ways fully stricken with strife
Filled with the caste, community and religion hype;
Waiting for the deliverer to come and strike.

In this thick jungle of human crowd,
No one is there to hear my prayer even if I shout loud;
I find myself surrounded by a thick gloomy cloud,
In the thick jungle of human crowd;
All along to share my feeling, I search for simple souls,
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Walterrean Salley 17 September 2014
“Scarce has become a happy meal“ At times, life is found to be much less than what one bargain for. But we go on in hope. Thanks for the truths presented in your wonderful poem. Enjoyed.
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Nema Shama 04 March 2008
like a shoal...like a mirage in the sea...good use of simile
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Suvikar Saliyan 03 March 2008
good one..............
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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 March 2008
Failures are the stepping stones to success and one can reach the other shore in the end.
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Raghavan Warrier 01 March 2008
Nicely composed poem and wise use of words. Excellent write Raghavan
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rajagopal haran 29 February 2008
waiting game is well pictorised Vidya..in love and war waiting is suicidal..same with life also..awake and seek..there are ways open...it requires opening the window to get the sunlight in....nice poem Vidya
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Tracker Ogryphon 25 February 2008
A visible strength in your wording allows for different feelings to come to the surface. Use your emotions. Thanks Tracker
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Mary Gordley 18 February 2008
Heartfelt poem of one who searches for the good in life. May you find one who shares the path of life with this same passion for the good.
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