Peace Within Us Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Peace Within Us

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Peace within us
Friday,19th October 2018

Only few could do it earlier
the task was holier than the holy
we were to forget the world wholly
with the commitment of no folly

yes, meditation was the best option
we all had the deep relation
with inner conscience
and outer appearance

both were to be synchronized
the theory was to be systemized
whereby worldly sins were not to be brought in mind
and the peaceful atmosphere was to be found

if it brings peace within
think that the whole of the world is won
there is external as well as internal control
now you can firmly respond to any call

prejudice, greed, and pride shall disappear
mind shall be free from fear
there shall no fear of death
the heart shall breathe with an ease

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

Peace Within Us
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2018

prejudice, greed, and pride shall disappear mind shall be free from fear there shall no fear of death the heart shall breathe with an ease Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2018

Tulsi Shrestha Indeed, one needs to get victory over prejudice, greed and pride to ensure path for salvation. Inspirational creation intended to enlighten a soul free of fear. Mystical expression displayed with magical word ensures the excellence of your intellectual creativity to revive breath in each word. A sense of reverence to Adorable Academic Personality Hasmukh Mehta for your poetic feedback in relation to my poem Sublimation 1 Manage Like · Reply · 2h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2018

welcoem tulsi shreshta 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2018

Tulsi Shrestha Tulsi Shrestha Thanks from internal core for your magnanimity and kind words. 1 Manage Like · Reply · 2h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2018

Sarala BalachandranSarala . Awesome 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2018

Tulsi Shrestha Indebted adorable friend for your poetic feedback. 1 Manage Like · Reply · 3m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2018

Hasmukh Mehta it is the great honor to read n respond with the same intensity 1 Manage Like · Reply · 2h

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