Peace within us
Friday,19th October 2018
Only few could do it earlier
the task was holier than the holy
we were to forget the world wholly
with the commitment of no folly
yes, meditation was the best option
we all had the deep relation
with inner conscience
and outer appearance
both were to be synchronized
the theory was to be systemized
whereby worldly sins were not to be brought in mind
and the peaceful atmosphere was to be found
if it brings peace within
think that the whole of the world is won
there is external as well as internal control
now you can firmly respond to any call
prejudice, greed, and pride shall disappear
mind shall be free from fear
there shall no fear of death
the heart shall breathe with an ease
Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta
Tulsi Shrestha Indeed, one needs to get victory over prejudice, greed and pride to ensure path for salvation. Inspirational creation intended to enlighten a soul free of fear. Mystical expression displayed with magical word ensures the excellence of your intellectual creativity to revive breath in each word. A sense of reverence to Adorable Academic Personality Hasmukh Mehta for your poetic feedback in relation to my poem Sublimation 1 Manage Like · Reply · 2h
Tulsi Shrestha Tulsi Shrestha Thanks from internal core for your magnanimity and kind words. 1 Manage Like · Reply · 2h
Sarala BalachandranSarala . Awesome 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1h
Charles LucasCharles and 18 others manage the membership, moderators, settings, and posts for Real Vision Aspirant writers. Absolutely wonderful 1 Manage Like · Reply · 3h
Tulsi Shrestha Indebted adorable friend for your poetic feedback. 1 Manage Like · Reply · 3m
Hasmukh Mehta it is the great honor to read n respond with the same intensity 1 Manage Like · Reply · 2h
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prejudice, greed, and pride shall disappear mind shall be free from fear there shall no fear of death the heart shall breathe with an ease Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta