Sunday, February 10, 2008

Peaceful Waters Comments

Rating: 5.0

The river of life runs long and narrow
with twists and turns here and there.
Sometimes it hits rapids,
sometimes it hit’s a falls,
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David Harris
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C.R. Clark 10 February 2008

Very true. The occasional rougher water make the peaceful time so much better. Thanks for a great read.

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JoAnn McGrath 10 February 2008

I used to love to ride the lazy river on a innertube on a hot summers day...so quiet and peaceful...the cool water and moving in and out of the shade of the trees into the warm sun as you float down the river...I love your metaphor here...took me to that peaceful place in life where everyone likes to be...not the rapids or the falls thanks for sharing this one David

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Thad Wilk 10 February 2008

A very nice write David! With a hope filled message! ! *10*! ! Best regards Friend Thad

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Duncan Wyllie 10 February 2008

David this is lovely smooth writing it is so appealing to the eye Love duncan X

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