Peacock-Feather Sea Poem by indira babbellapati

Peacock-Feather Sea

Rating: 5.0


scorching sun above
undulating waves below
in between the vacant me
as my eyes extended
their vision on this
monsoon afternoon
the sea turned
into one sprawling
peacock feather...

22aug2009
15.10hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 01 September 2009

brilliant imagery..very nice concept.....10

0 0 Reply
Mubeen Sadhika 28 August 2009

Simple. Crisp. Fine images. deserve 10+

0 0 Reply
Dr Kamran Haider 27 August 2009

Wow... I must say this is a divine imagery... Is this the peacock-feather sea is the beauty of your amazing mind or you visited that alone? ... wish I could visit that too with you sometimes... :) A friend, Kamran

0 0 Reply
Patrick A. Martin 26 August 2009

I close my eyes and I can see the tail fan after I read this....magic! ! !

0 0 Reply
Vaibhav Pandey 26 August 2009

so beautiful imagery.....very imaginative write..10

0 0 Reply
Ranjit Ravindran 30 September 2009

Nice poem presenting beautiful visuals.The glittering waves, producing peacock-feather like patterns, is really an arresting spectacle...Missing the sea a lot! ! !

0 0 Reply
Ratnaprabha Raykar 25 September 2009

after reading your lovely poem, i am wishing to go to the the seaside and rerun your imagery

0 0 Reply
Saadat Tahir 02 September 2009

vivid imaginative and crisp... a superb combination of style wit and poetry a superior write cheers and ten

0 0 Reply
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 September 2009

lovely imagery...lovely vision

0 0 Reply
Sathyanarayana M V S 01 September 2009

Great imagery Indira. Just touching heart, where it has to.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
Close
Error Success