scorching sun above
undulating waves below
in between the vacant me
as my eyes extended
their vision on this
monsoon afternoon
the sea turned
into one sprawling
peacock feather...
22aug2009
15.10hrs
Wow... I must say this is a divine imagery... Is this the peacock-feather sea is the beauty of your amazing mind or you visited that alone? ... wish I could visit that too with you sometimes... :) A friend, Kamran
I close my eyes and I can see the tail fan after I read this....magic! ! !
Nice poem presenting beautiful visuals.The glittering waves, producing peacock-feather like patterns, is really an arresting spectacle...Missing the sea a lot! ! !
after reading your lovely poem, i am wishing to go to the the seaside and rerun your imagery
vivid imaginative and crisp... a superb combination of style wit and poetry a superior write cheers and ten
Great imagery Indira. Just touching heart, where it has to.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
brilliant imagery..very nice concept.....10