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indira babbellapati
visakhapatnam, india
Saturday, August 22, 2009
Peacock-Feather Sea
Rating: ★5.0
scorching sun above
undulating waves below
in between the vacant me
as my eyes extended
their vision on this
monsoon afternoon
the sea turned
into one sprawling
peacock feather...
22aug2009
15.10hrs
undulating waves below
in between the vacant me
as my eyes extended
their vision on this
monsoon afternoon
the sea turned
into one sprawling
peacock feather...
22aug2009
15.10hrs
indira babbellapati
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COMMENTS
Ranjit Ravindran
30 September 2009
Nice poem presenting beautiful visuals.The glittering waves, producing peacock-feather like patterns, is really an arresting spectacle...Missing the sea a lot! ! !
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Ratnaprabha Raykar
25 September 2009
after reading your lovely poem, i am wishing to go to the the seaside and rerun your imagery
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Saadat Tahir
02 September 2009
vivid imaginative and crisp...
a superb combination of style wit and poetry
a superior write
cheers and ten
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Sathyanarayana M V S
01 September 2009
Great imagery Indira. Just touching heart, where it has to.
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Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home)
28 August 2009
short and sweet. peacock features are beautiful.. so it this
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Dr Kamran Haider
27 August 2009
Wow... I must say this is a divine imagery... Is this the peacock-feather sea is the beauty of your amazing mind or you visited that alone? ... wish I could visit that too with you sometimes... :)
A friend, Kamran
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Patrick A. Martin
26 August 2009
I close my eyes and I can see the tail fan after I read this....magic! ! !
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