indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
indira babbellapati
visakhapatnam, india
Saturday, August 22, 2009

Peacock-Feather Sea

Rating: 5.0
scorching sun above
undulating waves below
in between the vacant me
as my eyes extended
their vision on this
monsoon afternoon
the sea turned
into one sprawling
peacock feather...

indira babbellapati
Ranjit Ravindran 30 September 2009
Nice poem presenting beautiful visuals.The glittering waves, producing peacock-feather like patterns, is really an arresting spectacle...Missing the sea a lot! ! !
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Ratnaprabha Raykar 25 September 2009
after reading your lovely poem, i am wishing to go to the the seaside and rerun your imagery
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Saadat Tahir 02 September 2009
vivid imaginative and crisp... a superb combination of style wit and poetry a superior write cheers and ten
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 September 2009
lovely imagery...lovely vision
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Sathyanarayana M V S 01 September 2009
Great imagery Indira. Just touching heart, where it has to.
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Ency Bearis 01 September 2009
brilliant imagery..very nice concept.....10
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short and sweet. peacock features are beautiful.. so it this
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Mubeen Sadhika 28 August 2009
Simple. Crisp. Fine images. deserve 10+
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Dr Kamran Haider 27 August 2009
Wow... I must say this is a divine imagery... Is this the peacock-feather sea is the beauty of your amazing mind or you visited that alone? ... wish I could visit that too with you sometimes... :) A friend, Kamran
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Patrick A. Martin 26 August 2009
I close my eyes and I can see the tail fan after I read this....magic! ! !
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