David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

Perfume 'Alarm' - Poem by David Darbyshire

As she walked through the door
the perfume filled the room
everyone turned their head
how could they ignore

the perfume that she wore
was a little hardcore
everyone swore
she wouldn't get in any more

on the secound floor was a back door
so she dared to come in for more
I think she is going to do some harm
So some-one Please pull the smell 'alarm'

Comments about Perfume 'Alarm' by David Darbyshire

  • (5/24/2006 3:29:00 PM)

    A little dab of something classy behind the ear works well for me. But I had a good laugh at this poem - I can imagine your lady with something cheap and cheerful splashed liberally all over her, and the reaction of others!

    Love, Fran xx
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  • (5/22/2006 8:40:00 AM)

    Omigosh, I hear you loud n' clear and I'm smelling her from here! ... Why, why, why do women (and not a few men!) wear their scent so 'loudly'? ? ? Gag... Why wear perfume when the scent of clean(ish) skin is the best nature has to offer? ! Cute poem, Dave! (Report) Reply

  • (5/22/2006 8:26:00 AM)

    Funny Dave, good one!

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  • (5/22/2006 7:34:00 AM)

    hahah. David, very good comic relief write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 22, 2006

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