Tuesday, March 14, 2017

Love And Lust

Rating: 4.2
Love and lust are poles apart.

Lust is chaos, love is art.
Love infinite, lust is finite.

Love is sustained, lust is short.

Love is spiritual, lust is physical.

Love is ideal, lust is sensual.

Love is selfless, lust is selfish

Love immortal, lust is mortal.

Love is productive, lust is destructive.

Love is optional, lust is impulsive.

Love is energetic, lust is crazy.

Love is humanist, lust instinctive.

Lust is rabid dog, love is padagog.

Love demands inner beauty, lust demands appearance.

Lust starts from black holes of eyes, love from conscientious part of heart.

Love develops in brain, lust develops in gonads.

Lust stays on surface of the words, but love in depths of unconscious.

Love is rationally emotional, lust is emotionally rational.

Love is Allopath, lust is Psychopath.

Love is Homoeopath, lust is Sociopath.

Love kisses, lust disses.

Love honours, lust ravishes.

Love insight, lust is blind.

Lust devours, Love nourishes.

Love replays, lust betrays.

Love impresses, lust oppresses.

Love centralizes, lust strays.

Love expresses, lust depresses.

Love is healthy, lust is lame.

Lust is gambling, love is game.

Love is Platonic, lust is Bubonic.

Lust is shameless, love is shame.

Lust is volcano, love is rain.

Love is Abel, lust is Cain.

Prophets weep, Demons laugh.

Love is fruitful, lust is vain.

Love is need, lust is greed.

Lust is maniac, love is sane.

Lust is a beast, love is dove.

Lust is hatred, love is love

Lust is passion, love compassion.

Lust is beneath, love above.

Love is even climb, it is never lost.

Lust is a decline, it is ever lost.

Love is always true to the core but lust is hyperbole.

Love provides endless satisfaction, lust ends at opposite pole.

Love is the base of this universe,

Lust is baseless in itself.

My subject is my subject.

Such enveloping my subject.

Such as God to His universe.

Such as Devil to this universe.

Love is a sincerity and responsibility.

Lust is insincerity, irresponsibility.

Confirmation test is just,

sacrifice or obedience.

Both or only one is must.

Lust is aimless without love.

Love is aimful without lust.

My subject is thy subject.

My subject is love and lust.

I can tell you one secret.

Love and lust are poles apart.

But make union only when.

Lust is second, love is first.

Just, ask a victim of lust.
Jazib Kamalvi
Topic(s) of this poem: love,lust
All the cases of blackmailing, abuse, rape, incest, seduction, divorce and sexual slavery are the instances of the domination of lust.
Mahinda Abeysinghe 20 January 2021
Personally, I feel that it could have been better and stronger in a shorter version since the contrast between love and is negated with the last three lines. The element of surprise at the end, however, make the poem very interesting.
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Mashiur Rahman 08 January 2021
How nice the shape of the poem and i enjoy the sweet poem. Nice
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Jazib Kamalvi 09 January 2021
Dear Mashiur Rahman! Thank you so much for your nice support.
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Agbaje Samson 29 December 2020
you wrote well
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Jazib Kamalvi 09 January 2021
You commented well. Thank you so much.
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Thomas Northcross 19 December 2020
You nailed it. So many mistake for love. The line that I really recognized, Love demands the inner beauty, while is only searching outer beauty. Thank you for Sharing your heart.
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 December 2020
Dear Thomas Northcross! Your words are really precious for me. Thank you so much.
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Harshita Chaudhary 06 December 2020
The contrast is shown in a really wonderful way. Great work
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 December 2020
Dear Harshita Ch.! I am grateful for your kind words.
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Lea Jean Sumayan 02 December 2020
wow. brilliant poem.
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 December 2020
Dear Lea Jean Sumayan! Thank you so much for your nice visit and kind words.
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Ifeanyi John Nwokeabia 02 December 2020
God is love. This is beautiful. I love the comparison used.
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 December 2020
Dear Ifeanyi! Thank you so much for your nice comment.
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Martin Greyford 30 November 2020
A masterpiece piece of art in written form. Well constructed trying to separate the two word's love n. Bravo amazing can't stop reading it.5 stars +++
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 December 2020
Dear Martin! Thank you so much for your lovely poetic support and kind appreciation.
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Javed Iqbal 29 November 2020
Its superb. I enjoyed it. thanks
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2020
Dear Javed Iqbal! Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
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Amir Marandi 28 November 2020
Magnificent comparative piece. Very thoughtful.
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2020
Dear Amir! Thank you so much for your kind words.
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