Phenomenal Fan Poem by Jazib Kamalvi

Phenomenal Fan

Rating: 4.5

She is the spotless girl, Longingly waiting for him.
It is the life in whirl,
That is entangling him.
She is an innocent girl,
having a mole on chin.
Such as a precious pearl,
Sized the head of a pin.
He is the man of deeds,
Equally as of talk.
Neither a man of needs. Equally nor of lock.
He's ignoringly done,
What is proper for me.
He is the only one,
Who is entirely free.
Either to choose to get,
Or to lose her now.
Knowingly her the fittest, How? but how? but how?
She is a heavenly girl,
He is an earthly lad.
He is a son of Eve,
Adam is not her dad.
She is phenomenal doll,
He is phenomenal man.
I am a poet of call,
I am phenomenal fan.

Saturday, October 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: hero,symbolic
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 October 2016

Nice rhymes Jazib. Well done!

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Suresh Kumar Ek 28 August 2020

love is always entangling

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Jasmine Williams 12 July 2020

This is wonderful. I love it.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 July 2020

Dear Jasmine! Thank you so much for your love.

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Ziaeddin Torabi 02 January 2020

lovely poem.nice and lovely.

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 January 2020

Dear Torabi! Thank you so much for your comments. Thanks again for your nice suggestion.

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Fantone Mdala 20 May 2019

refined use of language Jazib Kamalvi. Great work. If you don't mind would you check out my poems and give a review on them?

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 May 2019

Why not? Dear Fantone. Thanks for your comment.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 November 2018

She was not on date, But he's a phenomenal poet. What a poem!

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 November 2018

Thank you so much, Aniruddha Pathak, for your lovely philosophical extention.

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