She is the spotless girl, Longingly waiting for him.
It is the life in whirl,
That is entangling him.
She is an innocent girl,
having a mole on chin.
Such as a precious pearl,
Sized the head of a pin.
He is the man of deeds,
Equally as of talk.
Neither a man of needs. Equally nor of lock.
He's ignoringly done,
What is proper for me.
He is the only one,
Who is entirely free.
Either to choose to get,
Or to lose her now.
Knowingly her the fittest, How? but how? but how?
She is a heavenly girl,
He is an earthly lad.
He is a son of Eve,
Adam is not her dad.
She is phenomenal doll,
He is phenomenal man.
I am a poet of call,
I am phenomenal fan.
Dear Torabi! Thank you so much for your comments. Thanks again for your nice suggestion.
refined use of language Jazib Kamalvi. Great work. If you don't mind would you check out my poems and give a review on them?
She was not on date, But he's a phenomenal poet. What a poem!
Thank you so much, Aniruddha Pathak, for your lovely philosophical extention.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice rhymes Jazib. Well done!