Out where the music flows. Out where
the sun sets gold. Out amongst the stars
so bright. Out where there's new life.
Out where the fields glisten with dew.
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Your poem is buzzing with new life, with a beginning of musical atmosphere and it takes the reader to the animals that quench their thirst by the rippling river, we may be happy witnesses to the life that just begins to the end of the day, whatever is this poem a wealth, what a richdom of nature you have shared with us, meanwhile you have taken the picture: we! Aptly titled " Picture" .Been reading this gorgeous poem time and again, but never bored.5 Stars! To MyPoemList.
You have imagined the most importance in life. Togetherness and natures beauty.
A talking picture about the nature and it's beauty, the art of writing is nothing less than drawing a beautiful landscape and your poem did the same effect here, I can visualize through your poem the beauty of nature, without any doubt.100*********
Somewhere over the rainbow! 5+