sumaira ...

Please Forgive Me

I know i was wrong
And i also mean it
.......forgive me........
What i did was wrong,
But no one can always be right
........forgive me.......
True - the past is done
It's giving me a new lesson everyday
...Don't be sad...
i know i was wronge
sorry sweety....
....forgive me plz...
Forgiveness is in your nature
I don't want you to cry anymore
I love you my sugar cane
.......So plz forgive me......


for you Ben thanks for correcting

Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 23, 2008
Poem Edited: Saturday, February 7, 2009

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Comments about Please Forgive Me by sumaira ...

  • Ershad MazumderErshad Mazumder (2/13/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    Its like a personal letter to a friend. Its not poetic. All expressions are not poetry.
    Thanks for sharing your feeling with us.

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (2/11/2009 12:03:00 AM)

    my sugar cane! wonderful expression, Sumaira...so sweet...no matter your friend won't deny you forgiveness...nice write emotionally expressive...10

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  • Ben Gieske (2/9/2009 3:02:00 PM)

    A worthy plea. Your sincerity is most evident. Even though we love there is no guarantee that we will not offend or hurt. So asking forgivenss and being forgiven must go together if love is to grow.

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  • Eyan Desir (2/9/2009 7:15:00 AM)

    This one was sweet, i laugh haha
    nice poem haha

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  • Jim Norausky (2/8/2009 8:27:00 PM)

    Very nice poem. Contrition is evident is a sincere manner. Thank you. Jim

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  • Ben Gieske (2/6/2009 1:38:00 PM)

    Your feeling of sincerity and desire for forgiveness is evident.

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  • Muhammad Ali (2/5/2009 7:30:00 AM)

    always it is positive to excuse first. nice poem dear

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (1/28/2009 12:31:00 AM)

    My sugar cane, so sweet and thses days its the season. Simple lines coming from heart that has already forgiven. Why shall someone not forgive, be it God.10

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  • Nagourta (1/21/2009 1:04:00 AM)

    You show great heart, and also an uncontrolled blackness in you...it is good when a poet instills an emotion inside of me, so go forth feeling that fullfillment. If nothing else you have spoken to me....

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  • Jihad TJihad T (1/20/2009 1:37:00 AM)

    i like it but you've try to improve it more
    10 for it

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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALEPERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (1/18/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    SO HEARTFELT THANKS FOR SHARING

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  • Tom HardingTom Harding (2/23/2008 8:35:00 PM)

    nice plea. liked the sugar cane.

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