Poem 602 Poem by Billy Loving

Poem 602

Rating: 5.0


Black smoke billowing
Orange flames shooting skyward
Collapsing building

Thursday, November 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fire,sunshine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shakil Ahmed 12 November 2015

you have adorned your haiku with beautiful images, i enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing

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Spock The Vegan 12 November 2015

It certainly gives an image, which is what a haiku is supposed to do. Well done. Thanks.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 12 November 2015

Very realist portrait of a building in flames and collapsing is adroitly penned. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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