Black smoke billowing
Orange flames shooting skyward
Collapsing building
It certainly gives an image, which is what a haiku is supposed to do. Well done. Thanks.
Very realist portrait of a building in flames and collapsing is adroitly penned. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
you have adorned your haiku with beautiful images, i enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing