Billy Loving

Poem 602 - Poem by Billy Loving

Black smoke billowing
Orange flames shooting skyward
Collapsing building

Topic(s) of this poem: fire, sunshine

Form: Haiku

Comments about Poem 602 by Billy Loving

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/12/2015 10:40:00 AM)

    you have adorned your haiku with beautiful images, i enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Spock The Vegan (11/12/2015 10:18:00 AM)

    It certainly gives an image, which is what a haiku is supposed to do. Well done. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (11/12/2015 10:00:00 AM)

    Very realist portrait of a building in flames and collapsing is adroitly penned. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015

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