Poetry, (A Haiku) Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Poetry, (A Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


The sea of rivers.
Endless, streams of poetry.
Sensations, Quivers.

Saturday, May 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,nature,poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My Poem, Poetry. Is Inspired by, The Incredible
Poem, the Rivers. By Susan Williams.
Thank You Susan! ! ! ! ! For Your Inspiration! ! ! ! !
This Haiku, I would of never
considered to attempt! ! ! ! ! , due to Fear!
Without The Help And Coaching Of
Practicing Poetess! ! ! ! ! Whom I Can't
Thank Enough For Her Kind, Inspiring, Persistence,
And Patients With Me! ! ! ! ! In getting me to try this
(again) ! ! ! ! ! heh. So Credit Goes, To Her Wonderful
Coaching! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! .....
Practicing Poetess! ! ! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 30 May 2017

WoW! Thank you for the very kind and totally undeserved words in your Poet's Notes! ! ! ! Haikus are very deceptive, aren't they? So succinct. So orderly [5-7-5]. So challenging to get that lovely image crammed into that tight structure..... but so rewarding when we turn the trick! And this must be very rewarding- -a Haiku of sparkling quality. We toast you, Becca, for being so refreshingly you and for working through this until you polished yourself a gen! ! ! 10's sparkling like moonbeams dancing in the river of this piece!

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Rebecca Navarre 30 May 2017

Goodness! ! ! ! ! Susan, Thank You! ! ! ! ! The Notes Are More Than, Extremely Deserved! ! ! ! ! For Your Poetry Flows Ever So Deep! ! ! ! ! With Words So Beautiful! ! ! ! ! All Readers Wish To Hit Save, And Keep! ! ! ! ! And Goodness Yes! ! ! ! ! Heh, Little More Trickier Than I First Thought! ! ! ! ! Heh. But, Very Fun And Challenging! ! ! ! ! Had To Look Up A Few Words But, Brought A Few Giggles! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Your Comments Mean A Lot To Me! ! ! ! ! Wishing/Praying! ! ! ! ! , , , Very Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Hope Smiles! ! ! ! ! Always My Dear, For You And Your Family! ! ! ! !

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