Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 424,347 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Poisonos Girls - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Wars are not won merely by bravery
You may have large army of infantry or cavalry
Wars may bring destruction and misery
It is useless, senseless and simply unnecessary

War can be won by use of diplomacy
May settle problem and establish supremacy
On one side threat and other side peace advocacy
Open field for sending state to insolvency

How many lives may be lost in process?
Atrocities, torture and force used in excess
No horrified tales to find its way to world
Deaths, hunger, poverty only to emerge in cold

Modern warfare involves great precision
But lacks firmness and vision or decision
Faulty planning and error leads to war
Nobody thinks of war and what is meant for!

Our ancestors had great vision ands reason
Boundaries were fully secured in all the seasons
Prosperity all over and no worry for invasion
Death penalty for robbery and high treason

Girls were used for sabotage in neighbourhood
They were reared and fed the poisonous food
Sent with mission to kill the easy target
Kingdoms sent into jittery and preparedness forget

Many kingdoms were simply raged to ground
The real reason was not ascertained or found
Poisonous girls played their part as sacred duty
They were not ashamed or felt pity

It is nature’s law that simply allow
Big fishes go to small one to swallow
It is continuous process and goes on
We simply catch the mood and act upon

Big kingdoms used to adopt same way
In long run it stood ground and used to pay
Little kingdoms lost their territory and freedom
This might be considered as tactics and wisdom

Modern diplomacy lack teeth have no such tactics
It only thrives and relies upon figures and statistics
Brutal use of force or aggression is only way in politics
Sovereign states are free to determine course of action
Territorial integrity and freedom should invite no reaction


Comments about Poisonos Girls by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (12/11/2009 7:15:00 AM)


    War can be won by use of diplomacy
    May settle problem and establish supremacy
    On one side threat and other side peace advocacy
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  • (12/7/2009 7:19:00 AM)


    See what Eve started in the Garden of Edan. (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2009 7:09:00 AM)


    Wars are not won merely by bravery
    You may have large army of infantry or cavalry
    Wars may bring destruction and misery
    It is useless, senseless and simply unnecessary
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2009 8:07:00 AM)


    wait...correction pleaseeeeeeeeeee...''STRATEGIES''heheheheh (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2009 8:06:00 AM)


    maybe these girls are partly a spy..of course, there are strategy...ex. is the trojan horse...many knights were inside the horse..that story was so nice...well, not only girls are poisonous or have the skills to poison orto spy....boys are more than girls...

    this long poem is nicely done...
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  • (12/6/2009 6:28:00 AM)


    Wars are not won merely by bravery
    You may have large army of infantry or cavalry
    Wars may bring destruction and misery
    It is useless, senseless and simply unnecessary
    (Report) Reply

  • Louis Rams (12/5/2009 11:37:00 PM)


    cleopatra, helen of troy,
    these were woman used as a ploy.

    they learned how to control the heart of man
    and send them to the frying pan.

    good write a ten
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  • (12/5/2009 8:07:00 PM)


    i like the old way most :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009



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