Pouring: Bursting Cloud Poem by Aftab Alam

Pouring: Bursting Cloud

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He is pelting,
I am melting
He is killing,
I am dying,

All lovely sweet- sweet song,
Into the ditch merged,
Returned now as a dirge,

Till I was knowing-
Life: as a river,
A brook..

Just now knew—
Its ocean
A dead ocean,
Dead motion-
Without notion,
Commotion,
No, no, Its potion,
………………………

Wednesday, September 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love,ocean
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Musfiq Us Shaleheen 24 September 2014

very rhythmic and nice wording bro....

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