Once, I danced;
Under the cloudless canopy,
With a dream of yours,
What a joyous moment it was!
I danced and danced like a peacock,
Thought, you will come....
Ah! panorama of yours', blinded,
Spotting such a joy,
Clouds came and poured,
Cloths were wet but I was dry
I Opened my eyes,
You were not present!
Abandoned the dance,
And in grief, cried I.
'You're the ugly legs of peacock'
This is a very wonderful poem of love, hope, joy & disappointment..It brought me to the moment as though I were there watching...I enjoyed this very much!
A great imagination...
very natural n excellent write
ah i catch you here on contest love to vote on your poem.........Excellent!
Lovely flow of words indeed....
Unrequited love, especially when you work so hard to be loved, can cause great pain and sadness.
Very catchy title. What a disappointment in the bliss of love! A lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Love must hurt. Otherwise it isn't love. Ma sha Allah... Loved the images created..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
EXCELLENT, wonderful poem of love, hope, joy & disappointment