Petals Of Peace Poem by Aftab Alam
Petals Of Peace
What life! For I know, it's a magical bag
I can see uneyed, the bag with its tag
Always empty, it has a gigantic desire
What a folly with us? Why bathed in pyre!
Unto a saint once I went and asked;
Near a pond amid woods, we both basked
'Is Containment of greed ‘the Epidemic'?
Why sealed within, with the petal of peace!
Lo! My bag is full of holy jolly fragrance'
Where is your bag holy man?
Questioned to him and waited for a while-
‘Peace is nowhere else if you are in search
Peace resides within you, with a merry perch
But the greed that breeds profound desire
Creates ire, then fire and then pushes into mire ‘
Excellent poem Aftab, poem flowed nicely, thnx for sharing
the last two lines are fantastically written with beautiful rhymes.. love it..
Peace is nowhere else if you are in search Peace resides within you, with a merry perch But the greed that breed profound desire Creates ire, then fire and then pushes in mire ‘ Great lines unveiling valid truths! ! Love them! !
Verily, peace resides within us and our greed is the destroyer of our peace.......10
Peace within lovely message sadly too many have war within and this planet is never without a war and by its record never will...mindful to stay on that peace perch...thanks and regards
Lo! My bag is full with fragrance' Where is your bag holy man ‘Peace is nowhere else if you are in search Peace resides within you, with a merry perch
An excellent poem on peace and well being. Your poem takes the meaning of peace to another level. It has to start within or there will be none at all. Only leads to misery. Well done.
peace resides within you so true if we only try to find it lovely write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/29/2023 12:00:56 AM # 1.0.0.1115
Life's philosophy and message described in easy symbols...bags and petals of peace a fragrance in hearts is nice symbolism.