Go On Writing Poem by Aftab Alam

Go On Writing

Rating: 4.9

We differ in resemblance, language, caste, creed, religion, color and attitude,
All the fingers are not same, yet while eating, all the fingers together
Now, my question is this; why can't we learn with this paradox, My dear?
Why scattered we and the society? Corruption, crime, terror, all in multitude!

Thursday, April 25, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: teacher
Partha Shaha 24 September 2014

good poem

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Walterrean Salley 17 September 2014

An appeal for peace. If only the world could hear this heart's plea, we all (young and old) could live happier lives. So important. Thank you.

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Shahzia Batool 05 May 2013

Effective analogy of the fingers size and function is presented for these differences which we have created among ourselves...! ! !

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Aadil Masood 03 May 2013

The writing above is the language of humanity. We all know in unknown hidden layers of our hearts that humanity has no religion. Certainly, humanity leads to unity.

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Heather Wilkins 30 August 2014

we differ in so many ways yet in so many ways we are all the same. when we come together as writers our hearts and minds are in tune. lovely write

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Varsha M 26 May 2021

Yes this is truth. We live eith difference but we forgot how yo make these differences as our strengths.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2019

There is diversity and everything differs. But still we unite and win. This is true that all the fingers are not equal but all unite to work in a hand and work together. This poem is of great value. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10

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Aadil Masood 05 February 2017

It was great to go through the lines and to feel the urge of peace respect and unity.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 January 2016

Verily, a fine paradox and message

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2015

Unity is the key about life! ! Thanks for sharing.

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