Praise-Song To My Body Poem by Daniel Brick

Praise-Song To My Body

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We both have and are our bodies.
Gabriel Marcel

Where does the center of my being
reside? It must be a place either
very close but hidden, or in plain view
but impossibly distant. Or perhaps the center
drifts between those extremes, stopping
along the continuum which holds them apart,
staying only a few moments at each place
of rest, ever shifting its appearance
and behavior, so my heavy mind is stumped,
my indulgent eyes roaming elsewhere, my soul
too preoccupied with salvation to care.
What does that leave to be the center?
My body, are you that elusive center?
I know wha you are: senses and sensations;
flesh stretched over bone, the soft and
the hard in tandem; your sensitivity to
climate and weather, your sojourns in Hell
and Heaven; your stories and tales
in the world; your health and your sickness.
I have been neither your master nor
your servant: I am closer to a friend
who abandoned repeatedly your long-standing
fidelity. You were the pale dwarf planet
against the blazing firmament of mind,
vision, soul. Are we strangers, or an estranged
couple? Listen at least my belated speech:
Forgive me, body I both own and am, I did not
realize your prestige in the scheme of things.
I ignored you for so long, puffed up with the vanity
of that trinity of mind, vision, soul. And now
as you dissolve into your old age, I suddenly
discover you were beautiful, you were always
truthful, you were always in the moment, without Zen
or Sufism, you found a centering place,
and you welcome all of me to reside here.

Saturday, December 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 18 December 2016

Such an amazing write dealing with mysterious human centre the place of existence existence-beautifully express in wonderful prose thanks

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Susan Williams 17 December 2016

Your poetry constantly amazes me. Here is one of your intelligent, philosophic and serious-minded poems delving deeper and deeper into the mysteries of the human existence- - yet your poem is so... so... so poetic! ! ! ! You are definitely a master poet to be able to do that in my humble yet quite jealous opinion! 10++++++++++++++++

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Liza Sudina 17 December 2016

I enjoyed this poem a lot. It is very confident, truthful, clear. Yes, it stresses that we don't really say thank you to our body for its service, warmth and place at least it gives to our soul. It is good that talking about body you don't speak about its pleasures, because such pleasures are forbidden by any Godly religion. DN such pleasures - are all demanded not by body (because f.e. animals never use their body for pleasure or excess) but by our mind and soul. Suddenly - it is one of my favorite poems of yours!

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Daniel Brick 17 December 2016

This poem surprised me too. And I'm happy it spoke to you as it does to me. I'm happy you found it truthful and embrace it as one of your favorites. Ultimately body and soul are ONE BEING, all of our parts add up to a WHOLENESS, but to understand ourselves we have to look at each part closely and individually. Your comments on pleasure show how one part of our being - that is, physical pleasure - must not dominate the whole being. BTW the philosopher I quoted in the epigraph was one of the Christian Existentialists who balanced faith and reason, body and soul, etc. in a harmony of being. He spoke at a seminar when I was in college and I always appreciated his understanding.

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