(((Precious Time)) Tanka Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

(((Precious Time)) Tanka

Rating: 5.0


Time clicking always
Seems so fast for those who wait
Like everlasting
But too short for those who care
Spending with the one you love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 13 January 2009

The ever ticking clock...thank you this is lovely....Fi

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Catrina Heart 09 January 2009

Great work here Marvin you are mastering all styles of poetry...from acrostic, free verse, now tanka...Fine imagery used, a thought provoking piece.10++++

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C. P. Sharma 05 January 2009

I don't know much about tankas but I liked yours.O am attempting here for you: Time’s eyes blink Love dives deep into the soul Unfathomable depths Mocking at Time’s existence Fill the time with blissfulness. CP

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 05 January 2009

that was so meaningful...u encompass your thought in few words so beautifully... : D

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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