Preference Poem by Varsha M

Preference

Rating: 5.0


Riding over the ocean
Never was my dream
But with your eyes
I saw it once for all
Nice was the time
We invested on each other
With a sweet hope to be together
Painting colors on sky as I like
Building castle splendid in mind
Seeing through way beyond time
Sailing across sea that seemed mine
Leaving behind the present here
I toured the future there.

Journey was explicit
Desired to make it concrete
Receeding back to level one
As I tasted the booster pleasure
Ignited charcoal to make it materialize
Step by step to the top as I see.


Coming back to my senses
I chose to make my dream, my aim
Life is all about preferences
Nothing is impossible, until I dim.

Preference
Tuesday, September 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,dream,preference
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dreams becomes real only when we put it above all else it always stays with us as a story untold.
At first when I wrote it I thought to end with the line life is all about preferences but a second review made me to amend and give a twist of hope to rule preferences.
Photo courtesy id 24187102@Alisa Karpov.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 15 September 2020

A well scribed expression. Truly astounding...10++++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 September 2020

Life is all about preferences....yeah exactly Life has its own choice to live on this earth independently; time to time it adopts everything........

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Deluke Muwanigwa 15 September 2020

Beautiful poem VM. Shory concise flowing and boom! the message is clear. Dont give up though the adventure is in crossing the Indian Ocean past Muaritius then Malagasy then boom! Then you are in Mozambique. I joke. Great poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 September 2020

Painting colors on sky as I like Building castle splendid in mind Seeing through way beyond time Sailing across sea that seemed mine. Really beautiful wonderful poetic lines deep from your heart dear poetess - tony

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M Asim Nehal 15 September 2020

Yes you are absolutely right. Some dreams remains as dreams whereas some we try and make it come true. Thoughtful poem 5 Stars....

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Rajnish Manga 15 September 2020

Building castle splendid in mind Seeing through way beyond time.... //.... Awesome imagery. Love becomes an exotic feeling after a point in its journey. Thanks. Its a delight to read the poem.

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